To those travelers
Yet a far distance,
Long it's so been, the bay hasn't arrived.
Your hopes drizzling away,
For you've crossed the limits beyond the sky.
A battling mind , a fading heart,
Ticking Time unveiling it's mask .
A biased toss and you choose to quit,
All the hardships through, seems a dumped pit.
O loner , even the spring takes time,
And the tequilas are incomplete without a lime.
Harsh would be the winds ,
And the tide would rise high.
But for your swim so far,
For the raw you ate , and none there to wait.
Scars you drew , your footprints on the dew
Echoes a loud roar ,
"The jewels aren't far ahead"
All this long, a thousand carnage triumphed,
The circumstances which provoked, and you chose to parade.
Just a little more of fatigue to have it all,
Eminence would open arms for you ,
There would lay ,a galaxy of abounded joy!
"The taste of success depends upon the ingridients you choose"-sid
Long it's so been, the bay hasn't arrived.
Your hopes drizzling away,
For you've crossed the limits beyond the sky.
A battling mind , a fading heart,
Ticking Time unveiling it's mask .
A biased toss and you choose to quit,
All the hardships through, seems a dumped pit.
O loner , even the spring takes time,
And the tequilas are incomplete without a lime.
Harsh would be the winds ,
And the tide would rise high.
But for your swim so far,
For the raw you ate , and none there to wait.
Scars you drew , your footprints on the dew
Echoes a loud roar ,
"The jewels aren't far ahead"
All this long, a thousand carnage triumphed,
The circumstances which provoked, and you chose to parade.
Just a little more of fatigue to have it all,
Eminence would open arms for you ,
There would lay ,a galaxy of abounded joy!
"The taste of success depends upon the ingridients you choose"-sid
This is lovely❤
ReplyDeleteAwesome Siddharth.. n yup d last line is really appropriate .. d taste of success doesn't only depend on ur hard work bt more on d ingredients u choose..
ReplyDeleteGoing through the lines one after the other ..... tHe last line just took my heart away 😍❤
ReplyDeleteVery well penned down ��
ReplyDeleteThat's simply amazing from a little boy
ReplyDeleteLovely
ReplyDeleteBeautiful❤️❤️
ReplyDeleteTooo gd my bro. .. ❤😍
ReplyDeleteOnce again..Mast ��
ReplyDeleteThe rhythmic pattern,
ReplyDeleteThe words and yes
"an amazing end".
Loved this Siddharth
Enthusiastic !!
ReplyDeleteThese lines are incredibly perfect like all other poems.
Keep writing Sid :)
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