footprints
I walked down, with barren feet
On a journey mild and sweet
To conquer the world with an armour
To enrich the Destiny with glamour
The shoes I then wore , with a broken sole
I ought to lose the war , as I instilled experience a little more
Down the gathering of sand particles I walked
Edging the waves on the coast that stalked
Rigid was the time that betrayed
Stuffed amongst sand dunes that I stayed
Varnished was the canvas I next stepped upon
Stepping not with dust but bright crayons
Beauty the canvas grew into
But how poor a luck it was
That I couldn't undo
Now that I've walked all over
I feel like wandering around
With the footsteps being through light and dark
It's time to leave behind
An inspirational mark .
Right since your first cry till your eternal silence , you’ll walk down a journey of thousand miles . Ever wondered whose going to guide you every tip toe you’ll step ?
“Footprints” , yes , your past excavation are gonna serve you as your favourite master .
The errors imprinted while struggling bring out in you , the deficit . And to diminish them off while your future march would lead you to the most perfect triumph in life .
“ humans compose errors, humans can decompose those too”
- siddharth vora
On a journey mild and sweet
To conquer the world with an armour
To enrich the Destiny with glamour
The shoes I then wore , with a broken sole
I ought to lose the war , as I instilled experience a little more
Down the gathering of sand particles I walked
Edging the waves on the coast that stalked
Rigid was the time that betrayed
Stuffed amongst sand dunes that I stayed
Varnished was the canvas I next stepped upon
Stepping not with dust but bright crayons
Beauty the canvas grew into
But how poor a luck it was
That I couldn't undo
Now that I've walked all over
I feel like wandering around
With the footsteps being through light and dark
It's time to leave behind
An inspirational mark .
Right since your first cry till your eternal silence , you’ll walk down a journey of thousand miles . Ever wondered whose going to guide you every tip toe you’ll step ?
“Footprints” , yes , your past excavation are gonna serve you as your favourite master .
The errors imprinted while struggling bring out in you , the deficit . And to diminish them off while your future march would lead you to the most perfect triumph in life .
“ humans compose errors, humans can decompose those too”
- siddharth vora
It goes offtrack as it approaches the ending and tbh the last paragraph ain't going well with the above flow.
ReplyDeleteThank you for this inspiration. I am really awestruck by this thought.
ReplyDeleteInspired. Really needed this one.
ReplyDeleteIt is beautiful. Like it should be. It is inspiring. More than it could be. In love with the rhyming scheme. And with the poems theme.with the lines written in. I won't tell my name because you know me. Awesome hai sidhu Bhai jhakass!!!������
ReplyDeleteBrother it's just perfection on point and the words ❤️💯
ReplyDeleteGreat!
Really loved the approach to the end..worth reading❤️🔥
ReplyDeleteNice written ..
ReplyDeleteIn love with ur blogs
Keep writing n inspiring
It's really amazing!! good work kip it up💯
ReplyDeleteRhyming words ... always been my fav. ☺ ... reading ur poem, 1 can actually trail his/her footprints in the right path & achieve the goals of theirs dreams and success !
ReplyDeleteAmazing as always 💙
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